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New Beginnings (with David's suggestions)

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I apologize because I have submitted this melody here earlier, but I have improved it as per the istructions of Mr. Barrett to the best of my abilities, given the time contraint. I hope I have caught what he was trying to convey. Please have a look at this Mr. Barrett, sir, for this little one's dedicated to you. Your comments will be of great value. Thank you.

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Excellent job... you got it

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by David Barrett - 05/04/2017 - 11:44

Excellent job... you got it all in there! Big difference between your first submission and second. Well done.

Thank you, sir. Glad you

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by pvcafin48 - 05/06/2017 - 12:09

Thank you, sir. Glad you liked it.